Thank you for this nice AQUA variant!
I only have a doubt on the shadow mask: I found out native monochrome tend to have plasma screens, so no mask at all. Later models shared screen components with classic shadow mask CRTs, so it’s not unusual to see monochrome screens with (useless) dot masks.
I think that a “pure” monochrome shader can just have a subtle scanline, just to add some organic depth, and stay clean to enjoy that blissful halation